Green Monkey

Very interesting story. But from the sounds of it, this sort of story has been done before. No offense, but I'm nit-picky about originality...

those are really cool. All of them. I've been trying to do stuff sorta like that but i stink at it :(

wow. thats a very good poem. I like it a lot. The last 2 lines are the best

10/10 black+white

Um... Well written. But I do recall that this site is called the YOUNG Writers Society

A mother was in her car with her three girls. The first one said, "Mom, why did you name me Lilac?" The mother replied, "Because when you were a baby, ...

Chunk of cheese fell from the counter of the room. It was a large piece of swiss, so when it landed, one of the holes fell around Jake and he ...

YAY! I can't wait for accessories! I think the Dynamic avatar thing is pretty cool, but it is true that there needs to be more accessories, pants, glasses, and shoes.

Your piece shows skill and quality. "This is her story, though not much has happened you can say. There wasn't much of a difference from day to day. Pretty much ...

Although I really like your poem, I dont think worser is a word......

I really like your piece... Though I do seem to say that about everything, I only reply to ones that are good, therefor I say that a lot. "some time ...

[quote="Deloclya"] The Curse of Mortality Death doesn’t hurt the ones who die, It hurts the ones who must say goodbye. quote] That part is really cool! I really like your ...

Man, a poem like that really gets me worried..... That's pretty sad. Sounds um... bad... Though your poem is sad it is also very well written.......

I really liked the poem though I do not know what segue means.... But I really did enjoy the last four lines. "would i still be here writing poems about ...

hmm... i guess your right... i probably should put my main points. "home"... but thanks a bunch for the comments! :):):):):):):):):):):):):)